Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In the high-tech era, the technology has become very popular around the world. As it has made many features for the growth of humans. Some people say that children watch a lot of tv and play games. While, others notion that these activities are not good in order to a child's health development. I agree with the given hook. I would like to explain both the viewpoints as well as why children act these skills in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are lots of causes behind this phenomenon. First of all, children have no any effective activities, which they can take. Because, parents work outside, where they spend too much time. And children have enough of demands. Secondly, the technology is also playing a considerable role. As it has made many factors. Such as computer, mobile, television and many more. Kids spend more time on these features.
On the flip side, certain individuals think that it is not good for the development of children. Firstly, its waste time of children. For example, when a person plays video games and watch tv a lot. Because of this, they unable to take other activities. Last not but least, there are many times when their parents say to children do other activities. Children do not take, because it influences on their mind.
To conclude, even though kids see television a lot and play video games, but it is very important do other tasks, because it helps find the ability of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ldren watch a lot of tv and play games. While, others notion that these activities ar...
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Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...uld like to explain both the viewpoints as well as why children act these skills in the fo...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...phenomenon. First of all, children have no any effective activities, which they ca...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gy is also playing a considerable role. As it has made many factors. Such as compu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.804 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52279527509 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8723507498 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1904761905 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9047619048 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302796882654 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794353184371 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905212712293 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1762659994 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084940814283 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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