Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, genetic engineering is one of the most crucial problems in the world. It is considered by many people that the process of modification of DNA harmfully impacts on the ecosystem and may be used for malevolent purposes. Nevertheless, I sincerely believe that by using genetically modified products humanity will have an opportunity to develop science and medicine.
On the one hand, the process of genetic engineering is hazardous for ecosystem. Today, it has a variety of types of genetically modified animals and plants. If one of these organisms enters to the wildlife, it will destroy biodiversity or even destroy it. Moreover, it is possible to use genetic engineering in order to clone humans. Many countries, which have advanced level of science and laboratories, can declare a war using genetically modified organisms and humans in any moment and threat to life on the world. Therefore, DNA fingerprinting can be menacing for humanity.
On the other hand, genetic engineering is vital in food industry. It was proved by scientists that genetically modified products can persist for a long period. For instance, the expiration date of GM apple in the refrigerator is 3 months while natural apple lasts for only 2 weeks. In addition, genetic engineering is the solution of many diseases in medicine. By taking genetic code, modern specialists can artificially originate new organs like heart, liver and transplant it to human’s organism. This will solve diseases such as cancer, renal failure and others. Hence, genetic engineering develops people’s lives and important nowadays.
In conclusion, even if technology of gene modification harms the environment and may be used in malevolent goals, it is vital in upgrading the level of medicine and food industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32624113475 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.098260049 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5953581565 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3529411765 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208484228006 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729065163114 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539056638178 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123492297751 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467767634336 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.