The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.
The diagram illustrates the proportion of people living in Australia who came from Asia, the UK, and other regions during a thirty-five-year period.
Overall, it is evident that the total percentage of immigrants in Australia experienced a subtly increase, while there was a fairly decline in the proportion of people who came from the UK throughout the period. The data also indicate that the period brought a marked rise to the rate of Asian people, whereas the remainder witnessed a little growth during this time.
To begin with, starting at less than 15% in 1976, the level of UK people witnessed a moderately fall to 5% by 2011. In stark contrast, positioned at 3% in 1976, the rate of Asian people saw a dramatic elevation by 2011. Strikingly, the directions of both categories contrasted with each other during the time.
Meanwhile, standing at more than 10% in 1976, the percentage of other region experienced a little decline of 3% in 1986. Then, the next twenty years brought a considerable growth from around 8% to 14% to the rate of other, which then little decrease to nearly 13% at the end of the period.
- The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions 87
- The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions 38
- People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising Some people believe that advertising has a negative effect on people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising Some people believe that advertising has a negative effect on people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss both views and give your opinions 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in Australia who came from Asia, the UK, and other regions during a thirty-five-y...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('subtly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
... of immigrants in Australia experienced a subtly increase, while there was a fairly decline in th...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('fairly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...nced a subtly increase, while there was a fairly decline in the proportion of people who came fr...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('moderately') instead an adjective, or a noun ('fall') instead of another adjective.
... 1976, the level of UK people witnessed a moderately fall to 5% by 2011. In stark contrast, posit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82901554404 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78810403706 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2718056981 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209953922803 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950327104996 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946414464335 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146106564356 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961385061158 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.