Completing university education is thought by some people to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skill is more important. Discuss both sites Give your opinion.
There is a common belief in our society that if someone wants to have a decent job then he should have at least university education while some people hold a total different view in this regard, they leave their having a skill and experience are more important.
Firstly, education is extremely important for everyone and many influencers suggested to seek education even every religion teaches at to have knowledge police stop another society for searching job one has to graduate from recognised university, I believe that university education elevates the position of candidates in job market because many jobs mentioned that for this seat candidate should possess at least graduation in this regard education is wide and far securing any decent job.
Secondly, after receiving university education people do not have any experience datum in items at home for which some people do believe that learning some skills such as freelancing are far more important because it would be easy for everyone to get job more easily. In my opinion experience is very important when it comes to perform certain job because with sound experience one would be able to work properly.
Thirdly, in this pandemic era where the world grapples with a deadly code 19 we have seen a new trend of work from home this was the change from traditional to new style, and many people across the world lost their jobs no matter how experience they have this is strengthened the view that one should learn some skill in order to survive and earn some money.
More preferable, university please significant role in building once character and make him professional off its chosen field whereas if you’re is experience and skill enhance its position in market and both are very important in their ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested seeking'.
Suggestion: suggested seeking
...rtant for everyone and many influencers suggested to seek education even every religion teaches a...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...nd make him professional off its chosen field whereas if you’re is experience and ski...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, whereas, while, as to, at least, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99326599327 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60245620288 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.340579466 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.166666667 106.682146367 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8333333333 7.06120827912 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24194237865 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132902919796 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622648512031 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137106044028 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725033915922 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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