Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today in the era of modern technologies, there is no denying that many people wish to get swift service and assistance. I wholeheartedly believe that this can be both a beneficial and adverse trend.
On the one hand, nowadays many people have a complicated daily schedule and getting service swiftly is crucial. Services save valuable time and are highly demanded, especially among office workers. Moreover, people do not know when the problem occurs, and in that case, getting instant help is beneficial. In real life, there may happen any urgent situation. For instance, when your transport is broken, you will search for swift service centers. Therefore, the rapid provision of services and information has many advantages.
On the other hand, people should comprehend that swift services are not always qualitative. During the repair process, workers often make mistakes, and the final product may have a lot of drawbacks due to the lack of time and urgent situations. Furthermore, nowadays many centers which offer quick service are highly demanded, and as a result, their cost is too expensive. Usually, companies that are capable of accomplishing many assignments in a short time establish the high cost. This harmfully influences the inferior part of society. Hence, getting quick services is not always beneficial and may affect negatively.
In conclusion, wanting to get swift task accomplishment can be both negative and positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33771929825 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87372424088 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6385126974 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215710666868 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686139472747 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445850208121 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132373807303 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262151155844 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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