In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Eating natural food always gives better health than eating fast food. Many people are suffering from health illnesses due to often taking junk food. It is argued that to avoid eating too much junk food government should put a tax on this type of sustenance. This essay agrees with this statement because eating junk food leads to severe health sicknesses such as stomach upset, obesity, and so on.
Nowadays some people especially children are increasingly affected by stomach disease and obesity issues. Working people does not schedule a time to prepare healthy nourishment and they eat fast food like hamburger, pizza, sandwiches, and so on. A recent study in India says that 40% of the children suffer from obesity and 19% of the children have admitted to the hospital for stomach surgery because of following an unhealthy diet. In short, people who eat enormous junk food will endure health-related issues.
To avoid the above-mentioned issues it is necessary for the government should impose a higher tax on fast food while reducing the usage of junk food. In addition, the government should explain the importance of a healthy natural diet and the impacts of eating junk food. People should schedule a time properly to prepare and eat healthy food regularly in their fast pace life. The Indian government foisted 18% of GST on fast food in 2019. In short, to save people from health problems, it is mandatory for the government to charge a large amount of tax on fast food.
To recapitulate, individuals need to know the significance of healthy dietary sustenance. The government should charge a high GST on fast food so that people consume fewer amounts of that. Individuals also need to take care of their fitness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in addition, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99653979239 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64275154457 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505190311419 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7921843774 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400592901397 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141738430114 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773919207085 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236529564479 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107471048065 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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