You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the upcoming New Data Solution Architect Seminar at the University of California, Seattle. And, I hope you will this seminar would help Database Consultants to find the greatest solutions of technological infrastructure while working within their companies.
I would like to attend the seminar since you had invited the working professional from top-notch tech giants companies to deliver a speech about the database products in the market. The knowledge shared by these professionals would be an asset to upgrade my skills with the fruitful knowledge of different database architecture.
Therefore, I urge you to please provide detailed information about the upcoming seminar next month. The information should include the dates and timings of this event. Apart from this, if you are organizing accommodation for the people coming from other countries, I would like to book my place in the accommodation. Plus, please do update the number of meals per day you will be provided during the time of our stay in Seattle. At last, please update the cost inclusive taxes for each person to come to the seminar if applicable.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25757575758 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92282898797 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2420158702 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27969445502 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097553571622 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591450468159 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171497783863 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483382869371 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.