do you agree or disagree with the following statement? at the universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Education is corner stone of every developed country. The efficiency of education id an important factor which should be measured to qualify and improve learning and teaching methods among teacher and students. some psychologists argue that social activites and sport games are not as much important as traditional classes and teaching styles but on the contrary new evidence declare that social activites and sport games can impact on effectiveness of education .in my view I agree with this approach for two vital reasons:
Firstly, physical health has a direct relationship with the creativity and concentration of students. Hence, it is obvious sports and especially ball games which I will explain the reason for mentioning that, are a strong leverage for guaranteeing the physical health and it is lead to more concentration and creativity between them in the end it increases the productivity of education.
Secondly, sport balls need a lot co-operation and high communication. So it rises the healthy social interaction among the students. And according to world health organization report, healthy relationships determine happiness and life quality directly. Furthermore, gathering sport games increases the friend zone of every students and it reduces the rate of lonliness.So we conclude that ball games can increase mental health and better mental health strengthen the education quality.
Finally, physical exercises result in more strength and better body shape. And it can be used as a treatment for depression and low self-esteem. And without enough self-esteem and self-confidence learning process cannot be occurred, so it is obvious that exercise has tremendous positive influence on education quality.
In conclusion I agree with investing on social interactions and sports as equal as lesson classes and libraries because from my experience, better education is depend on better mental and physical health and also more concentration and creativity, which more social interaction lead to them. Finally, I recommend the financial supports should be balanced both for lesson materials and sport games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60371517028 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07481624087 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538699690402 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.623174704 48.9658058833 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.230769231 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149853145013 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475847980455 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582510016911 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842825387069 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784860641683 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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