Some people believe that exercise is a key to good health, while other believe that a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different opinions about maintaining good health. Some believe that exercising is a significant factor affecting it, while others argue that nutritional food contributes more. I believe that the things which individuals consume have more impact on health rather than physical workout. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and agrees with the latter view
On the one hand, exercise makes body flexible and helps to burn extra fat. In other words, people who wants to be fit, do some workout daily which improves their metabolism. Physical activity not only leads to active body but also boosts the energy level which results in less fatigue. For example, In this sedentary life, people prefer to join gyms for warming up their bodies and perform various exercises resulting in the sound health. However, exercise is an activity which cannot be practised by every person. If old people wants to be fit, they need to follow a fixed diet.
On the other hand, intake of good food is the key influencing factor in being healthy. This is because body needs nutrients to be in a good state such as minerals and vitamins. A person is only considered healthy enough when he is free from all kinds of diseases. Untill good food is not consumed, body will be unable to cope up with any kind of potential disease . Also, consumption of balanced food fulfills the requirement of every body part, resulting in proper digestion and better health. Although by doing exercise one can become more active, things which a person eats have more relevance.
To conclude, eventhough there are benefits of exercising, I believe that consuming right food is more crucial as it channelize the food adequately to every organ for better health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, kind of, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04498269896 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5036382563 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6562962734 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285558413876 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868529923556 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645679122768 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177245123526 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113587132024 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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