Unlike the past, a huge amount of money tese days is being splurged on beauty products by both genders.This essay will examine sime reasons behind this trend, and what can be the fessible consequences of it.
There are several causes why people these days spending a huge sum money on beauty care. The prominent one is that men like to be handsome and women like to be beautiful than others. To elaborate, to some extent it is true that people looking attractive are often respected by society, then they feel proud to be get certain complements from them as well. Another reason is that needless to say, everyone is following at least a celebrity, people want to being like them. To explain it, many actors and actresses are being used for advertising of beauty products, and individuals choose to buy only that products which is showed by their own role models. For example, a recent survey reaveled that 80% youngsters purchasing wow beauty products through the advertisement which are hosted by their role models.
However, spending a large amount of money on skin care products leads to many adverse effects on human life. Firstly, it is not sure that celebrities use actually the same products showed by them or they just help the company to sell their products. If they do like that, it would be determental for a buyer as their skin can be damaged through wrong guidence of products by their celebrity. For instance, a headline published by ' moscow times' described that in 2017, a popular product called 'Mama Earth' face wash which was purchased by more than 90% people, after using this products they had to faced some pimple problem due to the product. As a result, that incident awared people prior to buy such things. It is also wastage of money as many people do hard work to generate income for their family if they buy useless, and expensive products, it would be hard for them to run family.
In conclusion, both genders follow their celebraties, and want to be a empressive look, owing to which they are purchasing products. In return this products may be harmful for their skink, along with it puts burden on their pocket.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77956989247 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48177540425 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4279074731 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.533333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190703357077 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706681670816 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597799106192 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136545335094 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468706006672 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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