You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are so important.
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the lost documents that I left at your hotel.
My name is James Smith, one of the guests at the senior executives symposium, which I have mindlessly left some pieces of highly important documents back there after leaving the meeting. My table number was 232, a table for 6 people which was placed at the corner of the salon.
As a matter of fact, the papers are extremely life-changing to me. Recently, my company has signed a huge contract with our Russian ally corporation in the agricultural industry that is worth hundreds of thousands of dollars, and losing these essential papers would be deemed as our reluctance in keeping them. To make the matter worse, my mortgage papers were among them too, meaning that I will have to face a penalty unless I find them and pay my monthly installments on time.
Therefore, I sincerely ask you to have your staff looking for them and also I would be so grateful if you could make some calls to other attendances of the event, checking whether any of them have a clue or not. I hope you understand how vital this matter is to me.
Thank you in advance,
James Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'executives'' or 'executive's'?
Suggestion: executives'; executive's
... Smith, one of the guests at the senior executives symposium, which I have mindlessly left...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...eces of highly important documents back there after leaving the meeting. My table number wa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59905660377 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52627259451 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63679245283 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5262406292 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250280118215 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977180668014 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683857361395 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157111064005 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818125071097 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.