Dear Sir ,
I am writing to enquire about some important papers which I might have left at your hotel ' Colors' while attending meeting yesterday.
My name is Sherry. Let me know you that the meeting was held at 2 pm on the fourth floor of the hotel. As far as I know, papers were left at the banquet where refreshments were taken. I implore you to investigate for papers with deliberation as it contains confidential information of staff and the schedule of rest of the meetings. Moreover , some of my personal documents are attached with them.
I would appreciate if you gear up your efforts promptly. I suggest you to look over meeting hall and banquet thoroughly. I hope that papers would be in either of two places. Kindly call me the moment you spot them. Thank you for your consideration.
I will be waiting for your response.
Yours sincerely,
Sherry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...g for your response. Yours sincerely, Sherry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77483443709 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74341685214 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8428867089 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.4615384615 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6153846154 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415247051232 0.216113520407 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120818745128 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847014798396 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209296249918 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107919664 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.2 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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