Over the recent years , there has been remarkable advancement in the technology. In particular, breakthroughs of media has intrigued the world with its aids. Nowadays, people demand more visuals along with news either on TV or newspaper. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same wavelength with them.
To kick off , it is no exaggeration to say that images give broader view of any matter. In other words , when we see the picture of any incident that gives us prompt overview of it without having glance on text. Moreover , news with solely words arise no interest to an individual listening or watching it. As people are more into visualization of any issue , this is adversely affecting the business. For example, Tribune newspaper is more in demand than Hindustan Times because the former paper displays news with relevant pictures.
In addition, images enhances the recognition of eminent persons of world such as celebrities, presidents , prime ministers. Next to it , news are often reluctantly listened by youngsters because text are either too long or news on TV are not pleasurable. If some pictures could be added with words , all walks of people can enjoy listening news and know more about worldly matters. With this effort , young generation and less educated can make more aware about day-to-day happenings all across the world.
To recapitulate, according to above proceeding discussion , i am highly inclined to my notion. It is apparent that uninteresting news can be like music to ears if they are followed by some real or animated pictures related to the content
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in particular, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04580152672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88046719526 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641221374046 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0551218847 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25380630996 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723919581531 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066631467451 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135245789102 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579463288876 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.