It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older.
Nowadays, together with the technological advancements and economic growth achieved in society, it seems evident that a greater number of people, regardless of their age, travel around the world in the past. Thus, there is a long-standing issue when the best time to travel is. People should go on a trip, younger than older, because of the ability to acquire different cultures or languages quickly and the safety.
First, people should travel abroad before it is too late because young people obtain different perspectives from various cultures and languages than elders. One of the main reasons is to travel to other countries is to experience other cultures. The young can learn the culture easier by experiencing a lot it by the social media, with the development of technology, such as Facebook, Instagram, etc. On the other hand, owing to the difficulty to adjust the liquidity of the society, the older may well feel unfamiliar. According to a study done by Harvard University, the older is harder to be acquainted with than the young be because the older tend to think conservatively. Also, the scarce chances to follow the trend of today’s social media accelerates this property. Furthermore, due to the decline of the functions of brains, older people are weaker than their learning skills are. As a result, people should go on a trip when young for getting avails to learn about different cultures.
Besides the capability to accept other social and linguistic cultures, the all-important reason which supports my standpoint is that traveling when young rather than older is the best way to travel since it can provide maximum security. No matter how enjoyable a trip can be, ending up getting hurt or sick, travelers would have been better off by staying at home. Therefore, safety is always the priority in traveling to make the experience worthwhile overall. When traveling to an unknown place, people can be targets easier from the crimes such as pickpocket. In addition to offenses, geological reasons such as mountains can cause accidents easier. Thus, to maximize safety, people do not go on trips when older. According to a study done by the Chinese Tourism Organization, 75 percent of the accidents that occurred to tourists in 2016 are that older people were injured or exposed to the crimes. The organization also mentioned that older travelers might unknowingly end up in dangerous regions; therefore, they recommended not traveling over 50 years old. Considering this case, it becomes clear that people should travel, when young.
Some people refute this argument for several reasons. When it comes to their evidence, youngsters not only are too busy to travel to other countries, fortifying specifications to be employed, but also do not have a lot of money to enjoy traveling. However, learning sociability by going on trips is beneficial for engagement because companies today tend to hire people who have the ability. Furthermore, there are many programs, such as exchange students, of universities or enterprises which encourage students to go to other countries. Hence, this counters the rebuttal.
In conclusion, people should travel to other places when young rather than older because not were it for youthfulness, it is rigid to ripen different cultures. Because of biological and social reasons, people are gradually thorny to learn new things. Also, it is safer to go abroad when vernal. The senescent are exposed easier in many crimes and injures owing to geological factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2973.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20665499124 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82317383142 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500875656743 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 921.6 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1558708933 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.517241379 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6896551724 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72413793103 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257723447761 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070834688814 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656281062777 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159809154112 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619553146763 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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