A number of doctors are concerned that, in recent time individuals do not conduct sufficient physical activities. However, there are several causes and solutions to this particular problem which I will discuss in further paragraphs.
To begin with, at the present, a hectic schedule is a colossal barrier in performing adequate physical activity. most of people are entangled in various responsibilities such as study and excessive professional workloads which stop them to workout. Secondly, lack of self-involvement is another reason, a plethora of masses do not seem interested in exercise they love to be either couch potatoes or find it painful due to this fear they avoid any kind of physical stretch.
On the other hand, beneficial mindset could play a crucial role in exercising, people need to know about the brightest side of this activity that how it helps to keep the body fit and lead to living a healthy life. Besides this state government shall encourage and build fitness centers in every locality consequently that more and more people conduct regular and heavy exercise. In addition, one is going to make spare time from their busy schedule for jogging, walk, yoga, and for other activities like swimming, dancing that would inevitably help in balancing their mental and physical health.
To conclude, people will adhere to the advice which is being given by our doctors in light of the fact that A careless attitude about physical exercise can lead to abundant serious problems such as obesity and high cholesterol and various other physical complications.
- Sports today is turning into a business with many companies involved and ever growing prize money for the sportsmen Do you think it is positive or negative development 92
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 96
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You sh 91
- Now a days many people choose to be self employed rather than work for a company Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantage of being self employed 95
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
... performing adequate physical activity. most of people are entangled in various resp...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... performing adequate physical activity. most of people are entangled in various responsibiliti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23137254902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83102490941 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7941152107 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.222222222 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224933564887 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820177991543 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529576034191 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136148424732 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618430711329 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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