WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows what happens to pollutants from farming and industry once in a river system.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Given is a diagram illustrating what takes place to two separate contaminants created by agriculture and industry (namely fertilizers and heavy metals) in a river ecosystem.
Looking at the details, it is apparent from the information supplied that fertilizers are significantly more simply to be eliminated from the entire system through natural process compared to heavy metals and that the latter are more likely to remain in the river for longer periods of time.
Turning to the lower section of the diagram, it is noteworthy that plants surviving in the river bed filter fertilizers from the ecosystem through a procedure called nitrogen fixation. Heavy metals, yet at the same time, are not absorbed in the same respect and thus either settle at the bottom of the river or continue to flow into the ocean.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the effects of heavy metals on the whole river ecology are considerably more long-lasting than those of fertilizers.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-06-14 | Drake004 | 72 | view |
| 2019-07-13 | radikalyuda | 67 | view |
- The table shows the amount of money given to developing countries by the USA EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010 Figures are in millions of dollars 84
- Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships Do you agree or disagree 78
- The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries in 2009 and 2019 and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make c 78
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08805031447 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8056518478 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.953311963 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.8 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10578411758 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565547774448 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306478802411 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635129290661 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272592613749 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.