At present technology has enabled human to do various challenging tasks with ease. A few of them are Surveillance and cellular phone tracking, strangest thing about these devices is that people never know that they are being recorded and observed by the special team with the assistance of highly advanced devices for numerous reasons. This essay will highlight that this act is certainly advantageous despite some inevitable drawbacks.
There are several merits of having such technology at present, therefore, it can be easily seen in the organization like banks, national security building, hospitals, railway stations. Nowadays closed-circuit cameras and cellular phone tracking devices are being used in various nations by their armed forces to monitor criminals movement in the country which is playing a humongous role in mitigating and eradicating crime. Secondly, sometimes when there is a global event people are kept under observation in order to provide a sense of security to participants such as eminent sports players, actor and actress, artists as well as politicians because they always have the possibilities of being harmed by unknown threats, that is why the entire global event is put under observation process.
On the other hand, while torching the adverse sides of this technology, sometimes it is seen that various inappropriate videos and voice recordings are being uploaded to the internet by intruding in one's private life which is not acceptable This is all being done to psychologically demoralize or harm others. However, this can be solved if government take this action into account, legislation should find out these people with the help of the cyber crime department and appropriate punishment should be given to offenders. Furthermore one should think as a responsible person that, why these technologies have been invented and what is the actual use of this invention that would surely showcase its worth in society.
In conclusion, the importance of phone tracking devices and closed-circuit cameras is innumerable, it is greatly providing senses of security to people in public places or at home, however, its demerits can be solved by bringing stringent law by authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...unishment should be given to offenders. Furthermore one should think as a responsible perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39942528736 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95203626335 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8688723225 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.9 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281198783216 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990717347747 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370012440299 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156240220306 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247044135349 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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