The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is
to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the
cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, traffic has become the major issue to solve. It is argued that the only way to solve the heavy traffic problems is if people stay in the rural areas rather than moving to the developed cities. In my opinion, this kind of method can solve the transport issues in the big cities. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will justify my point with valid examples.
Primarily, due to overpopulation in the cities from past few years, there has been an increase in amount of traffic pollution and a numerous transport problems. By this I mean that cities are jam-packed now. In addition to this, all individuals have to face a lots of issues when they are going for work. They all have to wait for long hours because of traffic jams. For instance, in the metropolitan cities like Delhi, many people have to cope up with this traffic problem. Furthermore, They have to waste multiple hours in waiting to open the jam.
The second point to validate my view is, due to heavy population in the cities, the accidents rates have been increased. Moreover, when all people are in rush to go to their office their chances of getting hurt in more than fifty percent. Additionally, because of high amount of people in the cities , they find difficulty in finding seats in local transport and even they fall on each other when the bus stops. Consequently, if there are less individuals then it will be easy for all. Despite all these factors, the major impact has fallen on the environment. Due to overpopulation the global warming has increase tremendously.
To sum up, I think, although migrating to cities is a mark of improved lifestyle, we cannot ignore the negative consequences of this notion.
- The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77133105802 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69683064963 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3807677731 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2352941176 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179609632494 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520221296341 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600507336124 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100396360378 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465079659049 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.