The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, there has been a surge in traffic in cities. Some people think that one practical solution to this is to stop suburban and rural people from moving to cities. I completely agree with the statement and will outline the reasons in this essay.
Firstly, the concentration of most facilities such as Hospitals and Schools in urban areas have made many people from the outskirts of cities travel to these places for better lives. As a result, these places' population density increased detrimentally, due to which there has been an upsurge in traffic during peak hours in cities. In developing countries such as India, governments could not provide many public transport facilities, and hence, most public transports are congested and cramped, causing inconvenience for the public. If the population is scattered equally across the state, governments could address these issues efficiently. Thus, discouraging people from the countryside from migrating to cities is a useful measure for avoiding transportation issues.
Similarly, since public transports are always heavily crowded, many people prefer their private vehicles for transportation. This increase in personal vehicles has led to heavy traffic congestion in these areas. Recent research found that people in urban areas spend 30 per cent of their productive hours in traffic-jams during peak hours. These unproductive hours have affected both their professional and personal life. In addition to this, an increase in traffic harms the environment too. Increasing usage of motorized vehicle has resulted in a rise in carbon footprints in these areas.
In conclusion, considering the above statements, I certainly, feel that ceasing people's migration from rural and suburban areas is an effective measure to resolve the current traffic and transportation issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, similarly, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55516014235 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93718727006 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8032736899 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232686370381 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739713420564 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852452646421 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140085959192 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549076214913 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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