The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia

The graph illustrates the proportion of three different groups of visitors in Australia paying a visit to zoo, library, theatre and cinema.
Overall, whilst most of native Australian and native migrants immerse cinema, library is the most favourite place for non-native speakers migrating to Australia. In addition, theatre welcomes the least number of tourists compared with others.
It is clear that there are 70% of visitors born in Australia visiting zoo, which is higher than the figures for zoo and library, at around 40%. The proportion is even lower in the number of theatre goers, accounting for only 20%. In terms of English-speaking migrants, the percentage was highest in the number of people going to cinema, at roughly two-thirds of total number of participants asked, compared with 50% and 40% of the figures for zoo and library respectively. Meanwhile, only over a quarter of people in this group choose theatre to visit.
Regarding to non-native newcomers, library and cinema are the two top favourite destinations when there are more and less 50% of them coming these places. Consisting of 33%, zoo is ranked second of four popular places in Australia, followed by theatre with only one tenth of the total opting to go there.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second, third, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12254901961 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77557919528 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7520813104 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.111111111 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140753705271 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607036497227 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534189642088 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931369299846 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394363270551 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.