Recent advances in the air travel have focused only on those sitting in first class and have left other passenger with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The issue in this question that first-class passengers have become a prime concern of airlines and are being inattentive to economy class is debatable. But what is the most efficacious way to minimize this discrimination? Some people advocate the above-mentioned stance while others are opposing it. I absolutely agree with the idea and I will support my chain of thoughts in this essay with examples.
To commence, there are myriad arguments in favour of my context. The most conspicuous one lies in the fact that first-class passengers are paying a considerable amount of money as compared to others. For instance, the airfare for a flight from India to UAE for economy class is Rs. 10,000 - 15,000 whereas for first-class the amount is Rs.55,500-60,000. Hence, it is apparent why airlines are prioritising first-class passengers.
Another argument in support of my view is that air travel is a dominant way to travel over long distances. Therefore, it plays a salient role in economy of any country. Governments world-wide has become more active in this field. To illustrate, 20% of India,s revenew come from air travel every year and it support nearly 11 million jobs. Thus, special attention to first-class passengers by airlines is justified.
On the other hand side, completely disregard other passangers is not wiseable.They contributes equally to airlines revenue as economy class passengers outnumbers first-class passangers.
To conclude, although i am in favour of special attention given by airlines to first-class passengers but it entirely depends on how to maintain a balance between them so that impairment is mimimal, profit or gain is optimum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, so, then, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08988764045 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82047091454 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63670411985 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7910138335 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868357200868 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310199051063 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427116991065 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.024012105035 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287994873079 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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