Write a letter to your landlord complaining about the noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include Where you live The problem What he should do
Dear Mr. Harjit Singh,
I am writing to draw your attention to the noise in the block of flats.
I am a tenant at the residential building for the staff members working in Ideal Driving Institute. My apartment is on the first floor of the building and my room number is 102. I am living in this place for the past 4 years.
The apartment is fine. However, the only difficulty is the uproar created by the little ones while playing. You may aware that due to the Covid-19 situation schools are closed. Hence, they used to play in the block all day long until late at night. Sometimes, the noise is so intense that it becomes difficult to rest. I have raised the issue with their parents but there is no positive response from them.
It comes to my knowledge that the land in front of our building on the opposite side is also owned by you. From the time I came here, it is locked. I humbly request you to convert that area into a park or playground so that children's could play and enjoy themselves.
I look forward to listening from you to resolve the issue as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Ramandeep Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eated by the little ones while playing. As you may aware that due to the Covid-19 ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...the opposite side is also owned by you. since I came here it is locked. I humbly requ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the opposite side is also owned by you. since I came here it is locked. I humbly requ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43203883495 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38576800259 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4393067616 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8666666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11495861929 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319226450055 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361992596744 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568305942404 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583223713672 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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