Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent times, e-commerce websites have witnessed an exponential increase in the number of people shopping online. Although this can lead to a host of problems, from my perspective, the advantages of Internet shopping overshadow the disadvantages it has.
On the one hand, it is clearly seen that online shopping is more reasonably priced. One prominent justification for this is that many shopping websites like eBay or Amazon now integrate money-reducing extensions like Honey, which can increase the chances of people paying lower prices. Another reason why the internet online is increasingly ubiquitous is that it is more convenient than traditional shopping. The former allows shoppers to buy a host of products with different price ranges and models at a click of a button, whereas the latter is more time-consuming and more physically demanding. Then again, with window-shopping or buying groceries in-store, people may have a higher chance of paying a more extravagant amount of money.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that there are a significant number of scams in regards to shopping for clothes online or buying cutting-edge technology devices. These aforementioned scammers may put false images of their products to deceive people into buying those. For example, the dress quality may be dramatically reduced or the technological gadgets may not run as fast as they advertise.
To recapitulate, although e-commerce can have drawbacks like scammers and deceptions revolving around the quality of products, the benefits of online shopping still outweigh the drawbacks.
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Comments
I think you went a little…
I think you went a little bit too harsh on me on this essay, my e-grader :) This deserves at least a 6.0.
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Welp, I'm talking to myself, I guess :)
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...there are a significant number of scams in regards to shopping for clothes online or buying c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, whereas, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49593495935 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1407273288 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2140103476 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191395648243 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746250195353 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444211717748 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100789983405 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555047287444 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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