the use of mobile phones has increased dramatically in recent years.What are the positive and negative effects of this trend
In this modern digital world, the mobile phone has taken the place of telephone as an electronic telecommunication device with the majority of both adults and children owning one. While some detrimental aspects can be seen from using this type of device, there are still enormous benefits that can not be omitted.
It is worth noting that a mobile phone seems to act like multifunctional device . First, it has tremedously promoted and facilitated our communications
, bridge the gap in the long distance relationships. A business man can negotiate without travelling, parents can know where there children are at any time. Moreover cell phones have saved many lives as they can be used for calling for help, to access to police, fire, ambulance, emergency team when you are in distress. With mobile phones, we can nevigate the routes, interact with our friends with texts, images, videos, and even use it as an office assistant to deal with emails, office documents. Additionally, it has allowed people for both educational and entertaining purposes: watch movies, listen to music & read books, to name but a few.
On the other hand, overuse mobile phone can have detrimental effects on users' health, such as cancers, albeit with inconclusive evidence. Excessive use of cell phone has been associated with anxiety, irritation, frustration and impatience. What's worse, mobile phone have become instruments for constant interruptions. Many people would always be on the phone chatting, checking emails receiving calls, listening to music, making it virtually impossible to avoid unnecessary interuptions. Lastly, it is plain that there is a link between phones and road accidents. It is argued that motorists have a much higher risk of collisions and losing control vehicles when driving and talking on the phone simultaneously.
In a nutshell, mobile phones are indispensable for our daily life and their benefits outweigh their drawbacks. Ploblems caused by these extremely useful devices can be alleviated if the users are more aware of their shortcomings and make a conscious effort to use them constructively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...w where there children are at any time. Moreover cell phones have saved many lives as th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 965.302439024 185% => OK
No of words: 334.0 196.424390244 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35329341317 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01701187923 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 106.607317073 201% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 283.868780488 202% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4453805171 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18412586179 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628089736709 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424620697468 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104735737823 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403671654888 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 40.7170731707 255% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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