The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane.
https://i0.wp.com/howtodoielts.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/06/test-2.jp…
The given picture illustrates the process explaining how sugar is made from sugar cane.
Overall, the production process consists of seven steps, starting with sugar cane being grown and ending with cooling and drying the resulted sugar.
Looking closer at the diagram, sugar canes are grown from 12 to 18 months before being harvested either by hands or with the help of an industrial farming machine. Following this, these harvested canes are put into a crushing machine in order to extract the cane’s juice.
After the extraction, the liquid is funneled into a limestone filter for purification purpose. In the next step, the liquid is put into an evaporator, which removes water in the liquid, until the juice becomes syrup. At the seventh stage, the outcome is separated in a centrifuge into white sugar crystals. Ultimately, the resulted sugar crystals are dried and cooled, at which point consumable sugar will be made.
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture We can learn as much as from books films and the Internet To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The charts give information about world forest in five different regions https i2 wp com ieltspracticeonline com wp content uploads 2021 05 The charts give information about world forest in five different regions png fit 720 2C439 ssl 1 61
- The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane https i0 wp com howtodoielts com wp content uploads 2021 06 test 2 jpg fit 670 2C784 ssl 1 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14473684211 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50619039674 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651315789474 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0516314268 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918997273213 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438105368344 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360399506606 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067307174429 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300143061846 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.