Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The discrimination is more aggressive in the world. In the developing society, woman are appreciated and I don't counter with this topic because woman deserve with it. So, the discrimination become very sensitive and any story attach to it still very hard to solve. And face to the pressure of citizen about it , don't have many people can discuss about gender theme. And the big part of this quarrel is the strength. In any matter, citizen still compare the strength between 2 sex. On this time, we discuss about 2 part of strength : physical and mental in the importance for success in sport. Although this topic don't directly compare between 2 gender, easy to see that 2 part of strength represent for 2 gender : physical is the man and mental is the woman.
Despite my endorsemnet with the equality for woman, I still believe that physical strength is more important for the succed in sport. The biggest reason why I partly agree with this arguement is the innateness. In sport, directly that physical strength is more necesary than mental. In sport, obviously need a lot of strength. Example, in football, if player don't have a good strength, they can't run around the field in 90 minutes. And I don't mention about make up for time. And nearly,we know that, 1 football player was stroked at field before the beginning of match. Fortunately, this player was gone to the hospital in exactly time and come through this case. After this story, I want to show the importance of physical strenghth in sport, and this is a premise to success in sport. Most of the people become famous and succeed in sport still have good foundation of strength and they combined healthy diet to keep the best quality of health.In one interview, Ronaldo- a super star in football advised everybody shouldn't use and addict Coca Cola and any carbonated water because it doesn't good for your health. Still of him, in the past, I read 1 news that the fat ratio of Ronaldo is just same with the ratio of one younger 20 years old.
But nowadays, mental health and strength are more valued because the pressure of life made many traumatic suicade and many fans and people regret their talent.
So, in conclusion, I want paraphrase to protect my opinion. And I in a situation 1 balance people, but we should have exactly opinion, because somehow the bad people or organization can take advantage from your false standpoint. At the end, I think we should improve both of strength part because they have the same situation on your life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ng society, woman are appreciated and I dont counter with this topic because woman d...
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Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...face to the pressure of citizen about it , dont have many people can discuss about...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e to the pressure of citizen about it , dont have many people can discuss about gend...
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Line 1, column 614, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r success in sport. Although this topic dont directly compare between 2 gender, easy...
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Line 1, column 646, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gender' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genders'.
Suggestion: genders
...s topic dont directly compare between 2 gender, easy to see that 2 part of strength re...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 706, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gender' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genders'.
Suggestion: genders
...that 2 part of strength represent for 2 gender : physical is the man and mental is the...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rength. Example, in football, if player dont have a good strength, they cant run aro...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... player dont have a good strength, they cant run around the field in 90 minutes. And...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n around the field in 90 minutes. And I dont mention about make up for time. And nea...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ntion about make up for time. And nearly,we know that, 1 football player was stroke...
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Line 3, column 947, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...diet to keep the best quality of health.In one interview, Ronaldo- a super star in...
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Line 3, column 1017, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...uper star in football advised everybody shouldnt use and addict Coca Cola and any carbon...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1087, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ola and any carbonated water because it doesnt good for your health. Still of him, in ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...because it doesnt good for your health. Still of him, in the past, I read 1 news that...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73287671233 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51930397104 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4554685544 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1304347826 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82608695652 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317298578944 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914958955211 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883221008722 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180616517084 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377346684749 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ng society, woman are appreciated and I dont counter with this topic because woman d...
^^^^
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...face to the pressure of citizen about it , dont have many people can discuss about...
^^
Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e to the pressure of citizen about it , dont have many people can discuss about gend...
^^^^
Line 1, column 614, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r success in sport. Although this topic dont directly compare between 2 gender, easy...
^^^^
Line 1, column 646, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gender' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genders'.
Suggestion: genders
...s topic dont directly compare between 2 gender, easy to see that 2 part of strength re...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 706, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gender' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genders'.
Suggestion: genders
...that 2 part of strength represent for 2 gender : physical is the man and mental is the...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rength. Example, in football, if player dont have a good strength, they cant run aro...
^^^^
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... player dont have a good strength, they cant run around the field in 90 minutes. And...
^^^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n around the field in 90 minutes. And I dont mention about make up for time. And nea...
^^^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ntion about make up for time. And nearly,we know that, 1 football player was stroke...
^^^
Line 3, column 947, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...diet to keep the best quality of health.In one interview, Ronaldo- a super star in...
^^
Line 3, column 1017, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...uper star in football advised everybody shouldnt use and addict Coca Cola and any carbon...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1087, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ola and any carbonated water because it doesnt good for your health. Still of him, in ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...because it doesnt good for your health. Still of him, in the past, I read 1 news that...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73287671233 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51930397104 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4554685544 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1304347826 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82608695652 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317298578944 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914958955211 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883221008722 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180616517084 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377346684749 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.