The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The given diagram illustrates that the working process of a hot balloon.
Firstly, This balloon consists of 9 main parts and one of those is the Parachute valve, something that helps to escape or leave hot air at a constant and controlled rate. And next one is Gores, these are nothing but parts on the parachute, that is divided vertically and along with these, panels are there on one of the Gore, where that is divided into horizontal components. The balloon with all these is an Envelope and there will be a skirt on the bottom of this, to attach a parachute or balloon to the burner basket with the help of ropes. As well a propane cylinder is using for burning purposes which is attached to the handle of the basket. These are all the parts that a hot balloon should consist of.
Secondly, Before starting to explain about working of a hot balloon, One should have basic knowledge of physics provided that hot air is light and cool air is heavy in general. So, To create hot air inside the balloon, propane will be mixed with air, and then flames will come to produce hot air. According to the earlier stated physics rule, This hot balloon starts flying into the air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, well, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53990610329 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2902619182 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5404247973 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.444444444 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164974352797 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849594601479 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564127309672 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139570122893 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401220817045 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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