You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Mr. Salvatore,
Last week, I have signed a tenant lease agreement in regards to your house which will be starting next month. However, I am afraid that I will not be to move next month to your apartment which you have rented to me due to personal reasons at home.
The problem arose in my hometown when I spoke to my mother. She wanted me to come to India next month, as we have a family situation which I could not share in the letter. It is a family matter, thus, I hope you would understand the reasons for my concern not sharing the problems and could not move into your apartment next month.
But, that does not mean, I am going away from the City. I will be back after a month in the town and will move my things and belongings to your flat. Therefore, I request you to please reinstate a new agreement, and I could come to meet you before going to India to sign a new lease agreement. I hope you understand my current situation and will grateful for your kind support on the trouble of not shifting to your flat in the coming month.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... I have signed a tenant lease agreement in regards to your house which will be starting next ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37264150943 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31762233 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2453367306 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2727272727 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438369796926 0.216113520407 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161021556586 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982305252109 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259264542767 0.12726935374 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613693346355 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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