In this contemporary era, the majority of people in showing their curiosity to find out the history of that how old houses and building are build in which they are living. This essay will shows the what is the reason behind this and how can individuals know about this in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are numerous reason that whys person has interest. A predominant reason is they want to know about the material which is used to construct a building.To explicate it, the ancient time houses were made with the help of mud due to which the atmosphere of the houses are so cold as compared to the rock materials. To epitome, a survey was conducted by Mumbai university in 2019 has revealed that 50% of old house was manufacture with the help of wood and soil. Therefore, in this modern era , people can research these types of things with the help of internet ans they cam also aid from books.
Furthermore, the another reason is that individuals also want know that in early time people do not have much facilities to make house and buildings then how they build tall building without tools and blue prints. moreover, they also use various pattern for design to decorate the homes. To exemplify, it had written in the newspaper that ancient people have various skills which they use to draw several things on walls.Thus, to know about the history people can watch documentary movies as well as read history books.
To recapitulate, the main factor of the humankind to find the history to know about how they build and what material they use in the past to design their houses. Nowadays they have enormous techniques to do their research.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50291218063 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513793103448 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0295745879 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396065978592 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149380257805 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922157260955 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254123588345 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102683695915 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this contemporary era, the majority of people in showing their...
^^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emporary era, the majority of people in showing their curiosity to find out the ...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
... which they are living. This essay will shows the what is the reason behind this and ...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: why's
...ce with, there are numerous reason that whys person has interest. A predominant reas...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'whys'' or 'why's'?
Suggestion: whys'; why's
...ce with, there are numerous reason that whys person has interest. A predominant reas...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...l which is used to construct a building.To explicate it, the ancient time houses w...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and soil. Therefore, in this modern era , people can research these types of thin...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...w that in early time people do not have much facilities to make house and buildings ...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...building without tools and blue prints. moreover, they also use various pattern for desi...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...t people have various skills which they use to draw several things on walls.Thus, t...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...hey use to draw several things on walls.Thus, to know about the history people can w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50291218063 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513793103448 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0295745879 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396065978592 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149380257805 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922157260955 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254123588345 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102683695915 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.