In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this
In the modern world, among the number of issues people have to deal with, historical topic is one of them and along with it arises something more specific – there are more people, in some areas, are becoming concerned on researching about the past of the house or building they live in. Within the scope of this writing, some causes are discussed and from then the ways to look for information are mentioned.
As the beginning part of the discussion, reasons are worth mentioning initially. Firstly, we can see that nowadays, culture plays an important role in human lives. It means, the more societies develop, the more people tend to appreciate ancient values. To illustrate, some old villas that were built in Da Lat city of Vietnam in Indochina period were bought with a lot of money, even they are more expensive than modern houses. Secondly, finding out about the history of the house or building helps people learn about design styles. Through this result, more and more people want to show their knowledge to other people. Finally, most of Asian people believe in the spirituality of a building. In detail, directions and constructions of rooms as well as the history of a house can effect to owner’s lives. For example, in some countries, it is wildly belief that people will meet numerous unlucky and difficulties if they live in a house that had some detrimental problem in the past such as accidents, illness, divorce…
Researching the history of the house or building, in some cases, is not simple. However, there are some steps for people to do. One recommendation is that they can chat with the previous owners of the building or receive advises from neighbors. Furthermore, there are forums or social groups on the Internet for people to get information about real estate. Thus, it is logical that we can share the story and discuss in forums to collect more information. In addition to, a look further into this problem is that people can look for information from books, newspapers or experts.
In conclusion, some reasons of the issue can be identified and there are some ways for people to know about the history of constructions.
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This is a good essay overall…
This is a good essay overall with many advanced vocabs and a range of grammars. However, there are some words used incorrectly. By the way, may I ask you what score you are aiming for? Thank you, have a good day!
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