You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• say what you like about the apartment
• describe the repairs that need to be made
• explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am glad to inform you, that I am content with your house no-13 Everest apartment, where I have recently located to. However, there are some reformation is required to be done.
With regards to the apartment, it’s beautiful as it has conservatory, the favorite part of the house. Also, the backyard is well equipped with vegetables and fruits. Moreover, the garden has ample space to decorate with different flowers. Besides, the balcony gives the cozy look as I can have my coffee and read book in peaceful environment.
Let me brief you about the reconstruction required in the living area as the wall meant for placing television has some cracks that can lead to water seepage and the knob of the kitchen door is not in place and can break anytime. On top of it, the fire alarm is not working efficiently and has to be addresses at earliest.
All the improvement that’s necessary will make the house look clean and clear. Once the knob gets in place we will avoid using hands directly on door that in turn will keep the door dry and tidy. Moreover, I will be saved from high fine once alarm gets rectified.
I really look forward to your cooperation in this.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70560747664 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53419706679 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630841121495 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8401571122 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4615384615 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136999231817 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449359053444 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432741813629 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708428964298 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489542569972 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.