The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart compares the percentage of six different age groups of male dan female in Australia who did routine exercise in 2010.
Overall, the number of females who regularly perform physical activity accounted for higher percentage than that of males in all age groups except in 15-to-24 years old group.
In 15-to-24 years old group, males did routine physical activity stood at 52.8%, outnumbered females which comprised 47.7%. Nevertheless, in the next five age groups, the number of males performed regular physical activities was lower than that of females. The proportion of males di exercise regularly declined significantly to 42.2% in 25-to-34 of age group and continued to decrease slightly to 39.5% in 35-to-40 of age. In contrast, the number of women who did exercise actively rose gradually until it reached a peak of 53.3% in 45-to-54 years of age. Furthermore, the figure of men began to grow in 45 years old and above while that of women went down in 55 years old and above. Finally, in 65 years old and over, the numbers of males and females involved in regular physical activities was a little different, 46.7% and 47.1% respectively.
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- Many children nowadays are spending more and more time inside rather than outside Is this a positive or negative trend Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your knowledge or experience 84
- Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped Discuss both the views and give your opinion 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school while others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped Discuss both the views and give your opinion 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, nevertheless, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03626943005 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69614325187 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.0980201853 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355114678489 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166306167595 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907915356878 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282185796036 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571346414102 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.