The passage and lecture are both talking about declination of birds population. The author states three reason beyond decrease in bird population. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, all these reason about bird declination are inconvenience.
First, The writer states, increase in human population lead to increase of building , homes and malls, these will destruct wildlife which are used by birds as habitats. The professor refutes this notion. She states. Not all types of birds will affected by increase in building. Some of birds will increase in populatiom like benjuen. And other animals which eat these type of birds will increase also. Therefore some birds decrease and other increase.
Second, the writers says, Increase in agricultural activities to keep with increase vin population will used more wildness area and converted to agricultural use. This statement is challenged by professor. She states, increase of agriculture due to demand for many types of crops not as result of elevation in human population. moreover, incraese in crops will provide nutrition sources to many animals.
Finally, the passage contents, increase in human population and agriculturat activities, lead to increase using of pesticides, which may get in water and affect birds and cause birds declination.
This argument contradictes by lecturer. She elaborates on advance in humen education and knowledege will make people more aware about health. They grow more resistant crops or They reduce using of pesticides or produce new types which are less effect or poision to birds.
The passage and lecture are both talking about declination of birds population. The author states three reason beyond dexrease in bird population. The lecturer casts doubt on claim madew in article. She mentions, all thses reason about bird declination are inconvenience.
First, The writer states, increase in human population lead to increase of building , homes and malls, these will destruct wildlife which are used by birds as habitats. The professor refutes this notion. She states. Not all types of birds will affected by increase in building. Some of birds will increase in populatiom like benjuen. And other animals which eat these type of birds will increase also. Therefore some birds decrease and other increase.
Second, the writers says, Increase in agricultural activities to keep with increase vin population will used more wildness area and converted to agricultural use. This statement is challenged by professor. She states, increase of agriculture due to demand for many types of crops not as result of elevation in human population. moreover, increse in cropes will provide nutrition sources to many animals.
Finally, the passage contents, increse in human population and agriculturat activities, lead to increase using of pesticides, which may get in water and affect birds and cause birds declinations.
This argument contradictes by lecturer. She elaborates on advance in humen education and knowledege will make people more aware about health. They grow more resistant crops or They reduce using of pesticides or produce new types which are less effect or poision to birds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...son beyond dexrease in bird population. The lecturer casts doubt on claim madew in ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut bird declination are inconvenience. First, The writer states, increase in hu...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... population lead to increase of building , homes and malls, these will destruct wi...
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Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...She states. Not all types of birds will affected by increase in building. Some of birds ...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the birds') or simply say ''Some birds''.
Suggestion: Some of the birds; Some birds
... will affected by increase in building. Some of birds will increase in populatiom like benjue...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...h eat these type of birds will increase also. Therefore some birds decrease and othe...
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Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...these type of birds will increase also. Therefore some birds decrease and other increase....
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome birds decrease and other increase. Second, the writers says, Increase in ag...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
... keep with increase vin population will used more wildness area and converted to agr...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...esult of elevation in human population. moreover, increse in cropes will provide nutriti...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide nutrition sources to many animals. Finally, the passage contents, increse i...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct birds and cause birds declinations. This argument contradictes by lecturer. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 249.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43775100402 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77642648021 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8229885456 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2222222222 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 21.698381199 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350212505645 0.272083759551 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120340397034 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13476521737 0.0662205650399 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211130819071 0.162205337803 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228691290206 0.0443174109184 516% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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