In many society the role of mother and father is referred what are the reasons behind it it and what will be the future role of the parents?
It is an undeniable fact that, in many parts of the world, the responsibility of parents are different. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind it, also what will be the role of parents in the future.
There are several causes why the onus of mother and father is different in the many communities. To begin with, people follow traditional culture. What I meant to say by this is that, in old-fashioned culture, the people believe that the Mother's role is just giving a birth to child and looked after their schooling, eating and homework, while the Fathers are the only one, who go out for work to earn money for families, therefore many women are deprived of education.
Furthermore, literacy rate is also one of the main reasons. By this I mean, it is observed that illiterate people do not have a family planning, birth rate is high, as a result women are forced to sit at home for feeding their kids, because of this 50% of women's not working, in India.
However, in the future, the role of parents will be changed. Nowadays, people are educated, also influenced by Western culture, both parents would be gone out for work and distribute their work equally, for holistic development of their kids, so they get equal love from the mother as well as father.
In conclusion, I reiterate that there are numbers of reasons behind the different role of the mother and father, like old traditional rules and illiterate people, however the future role of guardians will be differed, as people are become literate and educated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76119402985 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5873684284 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3024920137 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365372313117 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147920563951 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142257909369 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211181067983 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131798712546 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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