Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...to teenagers about the dangers of crime.I disagree with this opinion. First , we...
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...ime.I disagree with this opinion. First , we can’t negate that person who was a c...
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Suggestion: Prisoners
...ducating crimes to be beneficial people.Prisoners are done a activities which related to ...
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...be beneficial people.Prisoners are done a activities which related to housework. ...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
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Suggestion: a activity; activities
...be beneficial people.Prisoners are done a activities which related to housework. For example...
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...usework. For example plant the vegetable , sewing clothes, also write apologize le...
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..., also write apologize letter for victim,.....As a results , prisoner are released...
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... write apologize letter for victim,.....As a results , prisoner are released and b...
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...ite apologize letter for victim,.....As a results , prisoner are released and become to g...
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...gize letter for victim,.....As a results , prisoner are released and become to goo...
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...become to good citizens. Formers immates are the best clearly understand about da...
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Suggestion: Police
...g a crime and they work in all of place.Police Officers work all of time so they have ...
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...ve not time to talk about risk of crime.Of course , they are the best people to sh...
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...me to talk about risk of crime.Of course , they are the best people to show teenag...
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Suggestion: Policer
...hing police talking about risk of crime.Policer were educated about moral and inquire ,...
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...er were educated about moral and inquire , exposure with crime.If people who were ...
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...moral and inquire , exposure with crime.If people who were a criminal only know ho...
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... have been being worked with many crimes , prisoner will know about risk of crime ...
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Suggestion: Police
...know about risk of crime more correctly.Police officers have never guilty so teenager ...
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...ager can believe in them. In conclusion , people who want to know about risk of c...
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...lk with good citizen who were in prison.But it will be better if they ask police of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, of course, talking about, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02459016393 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63711315717 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.671740701 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.142857143 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8571428571 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422690336556 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229510477955 0.084324248473 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148950397383 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339372946239 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121846988522 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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