Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays , majority people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; when festival is celebrated , people only want to enjoy themselves.I agree and disagree with this opinion.
We can’t negate that people have not care about meaning behind traditional or religious festival.Instead of that people think about themselves. Before explaining the above , the essay will show us the meaning behind traditional or religious.Traditional or religious festival provide information about history and culture and customs. And they are oppotunity to thanks for heroes who has the merit of building and preserving the country.But people nowaday heartless.Teenager prefer playing with friend to joining or celebrating traditional or religious festival.And people think join festival to relax so they prefer spending time for working to joining festivals.
Technology and economic are developing so work pressure is increasing lead to people can’t spend time joining festival.So they can join festival by celebrating ,decorating at home ,.....They can join festival with friends, learn about traditional or religious meaning.
In my opinion, i agree with this opinion.We should spend time for traditional or religious .They not only protect traditional or religious values but also help countries to develop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87946428571 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22478394636 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4705825792 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.625 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55110806038 0.244688304435 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.310103116421 0.084324248473 368% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186583626622 0.0667982634062 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411425820243 0.151304729494 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.268051859787 0.056905535591 471% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.