You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment.
Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter:
– explain why you will not be able to pursue a full-time job in his/her company
– say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her
– tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. Recently, I was searching for a Data Scientist Job as I completed my master's from the University of British Columbia.
I wanted to become a data scientist for the past half-a-decade. And, I got the opportunity of an interview with the top-notch analytics companies who are working on new applications in the respective of artificial intelligence such as automation in automobiles, and robotics. Surprisingly, I got selected in Goggle as a Data Scientist Engineer in Seattle. Therefore, I have to leave Toronto in a month.
I was really happy working under your mentorship and guidance to handle the clients and got the industry level of knowledge in creating, maintaining, and analyzing the database infrastructure. This kind of knowledge as a Data Architect in your supervision at your firm was extremely fruitful knowledge which I have gained from you. However, I have to leave and grow more with my upgraded skills, and as you said earlier, the sky is the limit, and I am going to work in the major's league. I am so grateful for your guidance and mentorship.
I can stay for a week to complete the pending project which I have to finish before my resignation. Therefore, I will be staying for a week and will complete the last project in this firm under your supervision to keep some beautiful memories of your guidance.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, therefore, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94509803922 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08766194491 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545098039216 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3685241756 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230722874335 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756551769673 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057810600819 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100946716695 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724803984529 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, therefore, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94509803922 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08766194491 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545098039216 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3685241756 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230722874335 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756551769673 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057810600819 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100946716695 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724803984529 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.