The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The pie charts compare the use of energy in an average Australian household to the greenhouse emissions due to this energy usage.
Overall, heating and water heating consume most of the energy while greenhouse gas is mostly produced by water heating and other appliances. Heating produced less greenhouse gas considering energy consumption while other categories generate more greenhouse gas in comparison with heating.
As is illustrated by the first chart, heating and water heating consume more energy which is 42% & 30% respectively. But the greenhouse gas emission significantly less in the case of heating which accounts for only 15% of the total emitted gas while water heating produces in proportion to its energy usage as 30% of the energy used in it and 32% of greenhouse gas is generated due to this energy.
The lowest amount of energy consumption is in cooling and lighting, 2% and 4% respectively. But they produce slightly more energy compared to their energy consumption which is 3% and 8% respectively. The other two categories, refrigeration & other appliances consume a moderate amount of energy where refrigeration consumes 7% and other appliances take 15% of total energy. However, these two categories generate a significant amount of greenhouse gas which 14% and 28 % respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37378640777 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07558379455 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47572815534 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4415568635 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31656986671 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162231535944 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133665241091 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256709750263 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153621960319 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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