In this contemporary epoch , it has been observed that the impact of human beings on the Earth's ecosystem is leading to the death of organisms and habitat loss. The plausible reasons from the same are firstly overpopulation which causes problems such as food supply due to which a lot of land is being altered for agriculture, also, pollution causes one of the major deleterious effects to ecosystem .No problem comes sans a solution if the government takes up the responsibility of conserving the biodiversity .
To begin with, human interference in ecosystem is bringing more of a harm rather than benefit . Human civilization and technology has affected our earth , altering the pristine nature forever. Overpopulation being one of the major reason behind the harm caused to ecosystem causes problems like deforestation due to increasing demand of food supply day by day resulting in clearing the lands and using them for agricultural sake , which is also the home to wild animals and results in their extension too ,also, pollution has the second most deleterious impact on biodiversity as the emission of toxic gases and untreated waste from industries affects the soil ,water bodies and animals , air. To elucidate, it is found that air and water pollution contribute 65% of the detrimental effect on the netizens and creatures of earth.
However, the loss of biodiversity can be reduced when all the governments across the world spread awareness through their print and digital campaigns wherein it can be taught about the detrimental effects it causes to species and their habitats . Moreover, there should be camps to promote solar energy use to lessen the emission of Cholorfluorocarbons, carbon footprints as well as they are energy-efficient .
A recent survey revealed that in India government initiated such camps to promote sustainable development and found a sharp increase of 30% cleaner and greener areas in West Bengal.
To conclude ,the possible factors for the harmful impacts on earth are firstly, overpopulation being the major cause and secondly , pollution. Nonetheless, this problem can be addressed with the intervention of government authorities if they promote campaigns to go solar and spread awareness through print and digital about the harmful and deleterious affects being caused to the nature day by day.
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- Influence of human beings on worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity what are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity what solutions can you suggest 92
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32702702703 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08364376854 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.590049616 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.181818182 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6363636364 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213567151959 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786049553655 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709252401788 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115671479604 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756029718243 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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