In present scenario, more and more people are rely on internet for acquiring knowledge whereas, traditional libraries has its own important. I partially agree with this statement that people fetch more information through online.
First of all, internet provide unlimited and up to date information. In addition to this, students get enough knowledge whether it is related to the sport's, business or their academic subjects just by clicking the button of their mobile phone or computer. For example a recent survey showed that 80% pupils spend most time on internet for their education rather than goes to library. Another reason why, children prefer to study on virtual library is that it provide 24 hour service. A student get benefit at any place or any time with some extra feaurtes like audio or visual features. Moreover, with the help of online information the schlor utilize their precious time as well. Because, they can fetch knowledge while sitting at their home instead of going to the library. So that's why they prefer to study online.
On the other hand, libraries has its own value. If children need tranquil and scholorly ambience to concentrate more on their studies, then the libraries are the best option. Because, library provide a serene environment for toddlers one can easily concentrate on their studies as well. For instance every school has its own library in worldwide so that children found serene atmosphere there so that they wel concentrate on their studies. Secondly, it provides a reliable source of knowledge. Because, all books available in traditional libraries has written by experienced person. In other words, it is a trustworthy source of information.
In conclusion, although, online information bring some benefits for pupils but libraries are still most reliable source of information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27303754266 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71276745589 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6218210566 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2777777778 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147585366229 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459070485108 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354807463469 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932176694406 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196237048005 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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