Financial education should be a madatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, there has been a heated argument regarding whether school curriculum should include financial education as a compulsory subject. In my opinion, I totally agree with this viewpoint for following reasons.
To commence with, educating finance is necessary for students to form proper attitudes towards money. It is because financial lessons include teaching students about how difficult it is to earn money for a living. This helps them to gain deeper understanding not only about their parents' hard work but also about the meaning of money. As a result, they are likely to be grateful for their parents and treasure more the value of money, which leads to the awareness of the necessity to use money economically.
Moreover, attending financial education may contribute to students' gaining necessary practical skills for their later life. To be specific, financial lessons guide students to manage their own monetary status appropriately, including the amount of money that they receive and spend. This helps them to be more independent in their parents in terms of finance even from an early age. Furthermore, when learning about finance, pupils also learn about ways to make financial plan for the future. For example, a high school student may be able to plan to spend his or her money properly on necessary things such as school things and education tuitions. This may improve the students' skills of saving and spending money in the right way.
To conclude, financial education is undeniably beneficial for students in terms of creating better outlook on money's value and enhancing essential skills for their future life. Therefore, I strongly believe that this subject should be taught as one of the main subjects at school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22419928826 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65564849714 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2329136963 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177522587876 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729270099338 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414089404122 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135778287825 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494967747429 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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