It is undeniable that crime rates have reduced drastically due to the advancement in technology these days. Modern technology is an effective deterrent to serious crimes and aids in immediate resolution to some crimes. I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay I will state the reasons for my view.
The most compelling reason for holding to my view is that most developed countries have been installed CCTV cameras for security reasons. Nowadays, these cameras are ubiquitous and found almost everywhere in city for instance near residential and non residential areas, along expressways, roadways, trains and shopping malls. These act as a deterrent as they capture most of the transactions and activities throughout day and night. This is considered as primary obstacle for first-time or repeated offenders in these times. As they do not wish to be caught red handed and face dire consequences. Thus, leading to a concomitant decrease in crimes.
Another reason for holding to my view is that with the latest technology and novel gadgets the offenders can be easily tracked and located. The navigation data signals the crime prevention team who can then reach the crime scene earlier than expected and in some cases can prevent crimes from occurring. In addition, they might even be able to catch the offender red-handed. Because of these scenarios, they have become more careful and have slower down their pace. This has proved beneficial to the extent that governments do not need to incur additional costs in crime prevention.
In conclusion, due to the efficient usage of latest technology, crimes have reduced drastically to the benefit of citizens and government. Therefore, I believe technology has played a vital role in reducing the number of crimes. Given this situation, it is highly recommended that citizens and government should stay vigilant at all times and are open to use latest gadgets where necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... conclusion, due to the efficient usage of latest technology, crimes have reduced drastic...
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Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'use the latest'.
Suggestion: use the latest
...y vigilant at all times and are open to use latest gadgets where necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, therefore, thus, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21725239617 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83180297429 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8682711038 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0588235294 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205705607307 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619923001119 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807077059561 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128161986476 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824755637558 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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