when choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I agree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career. In the essay below, I am going to clarify the opinion above.
On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary to meet our basic needs. For example, we all need to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. As a consequence, most people consider money as a priority to earn at least a salary that is enough for them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. When we consider whether to take jobs or not, most of us choose the jobs that offer a high salary with heavy loads of work instead of working at companies that offer low salaries with light workloads. In addition, working under pressure will help people improve their skills.
Moreover, I believe that earns a living to raise a family is essential to everyone who lives in the world. Firstly, if you earn a good salary, you can be independent of your parents, and you can support yourself, buy everything you like without the need to ask for advice from others. Secondly, if you have a nuclear family, you have enough money to take care of your children and then to build a home without thinking much about finances. Your achievement will be worthy from your own efforts, from which you love your work more as well as want to contribute more. You can work overtime or night shift, not only you can seek another chance but also adding the salary to cover life. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and feel a sense of achievement.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I believe that money outweights all other motivators.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6357827476 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47083654352 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4864904383 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235271612209 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691774893791 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640575549714 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134163060102 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621788060373 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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