Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him/her. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Eva,
I hope you and your family is doing well. First of all, I would like to say thank you for making this incredible plan of watching movie together, as I was eagerly waiting for the same. I have to say sorry this time because I cannot come along with you.
To begin with, I received a message from my esteemed organization that there will a sudden audit tomorrow to review my balance sheet. Moreover, I am into finance department so cannot abscond from the situation as it’s a mandatory to handover the indenture to compliance team.
As for the movie, you cannot miss on because I know that your favourite actor is playing a lead role. I have a terrific idea that you can go with my friend Sheela, whom you met last weekend on coffee with me. She is fun loving and jovial in nature. Besides, she’d love to accompany you as you both belong to same town. I am sure you will not get boredom in her company.
I would love to hear the story, so make sure you watch it whole heartedly. Enjoy your weekend to the fullest.
Best Regards,
Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, well, as for, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45408163265 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31834286959 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9622603029 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379861972601 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120329612486 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885882405295 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204575514232 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138874758534 0.0580467560999 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.