It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the healthy problems have been receiving a great deal of public attention. Some people say that the government should allocate money to enhance a healthy lifestyle to encourage the prevention of illness rather than to treat patients. While I accept that the prevention of illness bring more benifts, I completely disagree this statement.
On the one hand, the government invests the large amount of public money in encouraging a healthy style that offers considerable benefits for their residents. First, since many diseases are the direct result of people’s unhealthy habits, people are becoming increasingly the health issues such as higher risk of contracting cardiovascular and obesity diseases. For instance, youngsters nowadays have a tendency to eat more junk and fast food than whole food, which affect seriously their health if eaten for a long time. Second, by being healthy style, people could save a lot of money in their life. In fact, there are a number of incureable diseases including HIV, AIDS and cancers, which spend the amount of money to prolong the life of patients contracting such diseases.
On the other hand, public money should also be allocated for the treatment of people who are already ill. First, due to the fact that some diseases are not likely to prevent, the government should spend it on treatment. For example, all countries in the world have still not had the vaccince to protect people, who are suffered from Corona virus, from that disease that except for the treatment. Second, there are some illnesses and disorders that are inherited, regardless of their diet or lifestyle. This means that both people and the government would be impossible to prevent. Therefore, the government needs to spend the amount of money on treatment patients.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that both spending money on promoting healthy lifestyle and treating people who are already ill are equally essential in protecting people from diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, except for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23052959502 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68420152751 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8103655409 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354332455737 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122954964809 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871600559934 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245028546063 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766753719076 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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