In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Books used to be considered as the ultimate source of knowledge in many years ago. However, in this day and age, the Internet can replace that role when it provides people with access to an endless amount of information. In my opinion, I believe that the invention of the Internet can bring more pros than cons
On the one hand, due to the fast and convenient nature of using the internet, people can be impatient when it comes to books. In this digital era, finding information is no longer a difficult task, with just only a click, everything you need will pop up in front of you. As a result, this can totally deteriorate a good habit of absorbing knowledge from papers as well as make people become more dependent on technology
On the other hand, it is way more beneficial for human-being with the existence of the Internet. Unlike in the past, when people have to open every single book in order to find the information they want. Nowadays, it is absolutely easier to do that with the assistance of the Internet, it not only saves more time but also helps you reach a larger scale of knowledge in comparison with books. As an example, there is always a limited amount of knowledge that only related to the main topic of a particular book, while the Internet can give you a variety of distinctive information
To conclude, although it is still controversial in deciding whether the internet has more benefits or not. From my perspective, I suppose that thanks to the Internet, the opportunities people can broaden their horizons is significantly increased and the amount of time in researching is also reduced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, i suppose, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72438162544 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76517063441 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7713928624 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.555555556 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239312285987 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102093278316 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269847708035 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146899706571 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469378551128 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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