Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, extreme sports have attracted a great deal of public attention. A bunch of people claims that sky diving, skiing and other sports which carry high risks should be prohibited by governments, In my point of view, I totally oppose this belief.
From my perspective, those who are considered as thrill- seeker choice of sports would not completely grapple with high risks as it is often claimed. As a matter of fact, organizations that are in charge of hosting these kinds of activities are definitely verified and issued the business license to ensure that the safety instructions and procedures are clearly stated to the participants. On top of that, people who want to engage in high-risk sports such as skiing or sky diving must participate in the full training courses which provide them with the appropriate knowledge of how to employ the protective equipment to prevent themselves from hidden danger. It is also worth noting that the experts always keep their eye on the participant as their responsibility in their works.
In addition, extreme sports should be widely recognized and encouraged instead of being abolished. It is undeniable that these types of activities can do wonders for both physical and mental healths. In the fast pace of life where a number of people are undergoing diseases or mental illnesses, enjoyment and a sense of accomplishment in sports are wonderful options to relieve stress and get fit. On top of that, if dangerous sports were banned, our world would not experience the diversity of sports and humans would not have opportunities to be immersed in a big picture of nature.
In conclusion, I disagree with the notion that because dangers are likely to occur and threaten people when taking part in extreme sports, governments should not allow citizens to engage in them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ttention. A bunch of people claims that sky diving, skiing and other sports which carry hi...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...e in high-risk sports such as skiing or sky diving must participate in the full training c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02950819672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81155140174 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6848090062 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246650942839 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827099366868 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066434834607 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137748849478 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319121664252 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.