Here, the chart demonstrate the proportion of financial income that an offspring charity which do expenses and credit in an annual, the charity located in the USA, units are measured in percentage.
Overall, it is manifest that the most striking feature is program services which dominance the market, however investment income is made the least ratio of charity funds and rest of the sectors is fluctuations.
At a first glance, the chart reveals that in revenue sources sector, the percentage of donated food is accounted more than half, it is 86.6% which is followed community contributions, yet less than donated food, it is 10.4%. The ratio of investment income as well as government grant field is identical. It is interesting to note that the program revenue is nearly 5 times as twice as other income field, it is 2.2% and 0.4% respectively.
Further analysis of the pie chart portrays that in expenditure of children charity sector, the ratio of program services has been optimum expenses than all other fields, it is 95.8%. It can be clearly observed that the remaining two fields fundraising and management and general is presented 2.6% as well as 1.6% respectively.
- Throughout history male leaders have led us into violence and conflict If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 11
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The chart below shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998 84
- children 039 s activities The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie gra 11
- Some people argue that technological inventions such as smartphones are making people socially less interactive Discuss both views 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05641025641 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82195767188 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5227120782 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.857142857 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993820812263 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041457615006 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472416931186 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651635921749 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386481215529 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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