Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages
Education is a rudimentary thing each and every citizen need to Grab the knowledge it will not only benefit to the particular student but also that for nation so, school should be more conscious while making any decision. After pursued 10+2 school goers likely to perform activities likewise, either travelling or doing job before arriving to the varsity school. This essay will not only discuss the merits related to the aforementioned issue but also the demerit will be articulated in the upcoming paragraph.
To embark with, there are two prominent benefit for performing work or spare time activity before going to college. Firstly, particular pupil will obtain experience that how to earn financial income and also, that specific money might applied to their college fees this would be an major benefit to the tutees. Secondly, whenever after completed 12th standard one should be an full of burden related to their studies and in order to deteriorate this type of anxiety student can go for tourism in terms of not only to achieve sense of achievement but also to explore the new places. As a result, student will likely to acquire interest to their studies in the college periods. For instance, In New Zealand, Appropriate more than 60% of students likely to perform this type of activity and after doing this type of things then only they will get admission in the future studies.
Considering further, there are some drawbacks which should not be eradicated owing to it contributed the half amount of weightage for the woe. after completed they secondary studies and if they disconnected toward they studies then it might get obstacle in they studies. Having said this, after loosing the interest into the studies then it will adversity to grab the knowledge. As a consequence, the rate of students will likely to get mitigate by passing the time in the college. For example, in the year 1850, according to the fact of science the studies ought to be continue till a particular student wants to studies, yet there should not be include any activities in between the studies.
In conclusion, to performing various types of activities is an paramount one to relax our mind, however studies should not be get spoiled because knowledge makes us great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99470899471 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59501021064 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7207742328 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103495459021 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436385902832 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599364710685 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590519328185 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416084166958 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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