The 2 maps show an area before and after building the hydroelectric dam
Overall, it is clear that the area witnessed considerable converts. Some new amenities such as hotel, village, zoo…have also been added.
In 1990, the river was in the center of the area. In the west of the river, there were forest, ancient structure, rare plants and animals. Besides, irrigated farmland and village situated to the east of the river.
In 2000, the most striking change is that a part of the river to the north of the area has been replaced by a lake and the hydroelectric dam has been constructed in the center of the area. In addition to, one notable change is that forest, ancient structure, rare plants and animals have been removed while the irrigated farmland and village have been made way for a hotel. Furthermore, another major change to the area has been the building of electricity to the west of the river and village to the east of the river. If you drive to the south of the area, you will reach a zoo.
- The table shows the export values of various products in 1997 and 2010 73
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade Iabelled coffee and banana in 1990 and 2004 in five European countries 70
- The line graph shows the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001 73
- The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer s total sales in different regions from 2006 to 2010 67
- In many countries today people in cities either live alone or in small family units rather than in large family groups Is this a positive or negative trend 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52352941176 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45728209494 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4208009023 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11813399612 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534971665682 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567017922671 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696922968615 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441789697215 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.